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š 3 minutes to fix your bad LinkedIn hooks forever
1 simple copywriting adjustment I use to troubleshoot underperforming founder content

Hey!
Welcome to Social Filesāyour no-BS guide to generating demand for your B2B product using social & content.
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š DEEP DIVE
3 minutes to fix your bad LinkedIn hooks forever
1 simple copywriting adjustment I use to troubleshoot underperforming founder content

Okay. Let me guess.
My propaganda got to you and you started posting founder-led content on LinkedIn. Butā¦itās not working the way you thought it would. Why arenāt the posts getting more engagement? Does this actually not work??
Slow down.
LinkedIn works for B2B founders. You're probably just writing bad hooks.
The hook is the first 1-3 lines of the post. You know, before you have to click āSee Moreā to read the rest.

If your posts arenāt hitting, your first 1-3 sentences are probably lame. Uninspiring. Boring. Bad.
Tough love, but true. Letās troubleshoot it, together. Thereās one shift I want you to try in your next LinkedIn post. Itās a simple we use all the time with our founder-led content clients.
Use a story-based hook.
Instead of starting with āhow toā¦ā start with āhow Iā¦ā
See, when founders start posting on LinkedIn, theyāll usually start ripping āhow toā educational posts.
3 tips to write better emails
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Stuff like that. Sounds good in theoryāand can work sometimesābut there are 2 problems.
Problem 1: The post doesnāt tell the reader why they should trust you. For example, if I started a posting with āHereās 3 tips for getting clients from LinkedInā the reader has NO IDEA why Iām uniquely qualified to give that advice. You could be some 19-year-old personal brand bro who watched 1 YouTube video on how to generate 10K a month on LinkedIn. Lol.
Problem 2: Educational hooks are boring. āHereās 3 tips for getting clients from LinkedInā would quite literally put me to sleep. Yawn. Give me something exciting!
What if we made the hook a story instead?
How would that look?
āLast week I sat down with a SaaS founder doing $1M ARR who was struggling to get any traction on LinkedIn.
Hereās how we fixed it and increased his impressions by 110% in the next 7 days (with 1 shift):ā
Which hook would you click? The latter, right?
In the first 2 lines, you understand why you should trust me (clear, quantifiable results for a specific ICP) and you're hooked into a story (how did we fix this founderās performance?). Humans love stories. We want to be told stories, not lectured at like weāre in a college classroom.
So, in your next piece of LinkedIn content, try framing your hook as a story.
These stories will come from 2 potential sources:
Source 1: Recent conversations with customers, prospects, or team members. For example, if you're founder of a sales tech SaaS that helps startups get better results from outbound, you might write a post about a prospect who was dealing with a common pain point (like low response rates).
Source 2: Experiences from earlier in your career. For example, if I was building a SaaS to help with LinkedIn content creationā¦like I amā¦I might write a post about how posting content to social media helped me land my dream job.
And a quick bonus tip since you made it to the end of thisāadd a relevant piece of media to the post, too. In the 200+ posts we have going live per week for clients at Compound, posts with relevant photos and videos are performing way better.
Quick one today, as promised. Now go try this tactic out.
[If you want more insights on how to write great LinkedIn hooks, hereās another piece you might like]
š FILE CABINET
Hereās my favorite marketing and business content I bookmarked this week.
The Best LinkedIn Content Strategy for SaaS by Tommy Clark š„
Freelance vs Agencies vs Creative Studios (becoming an entrepreneur as a creative) by Oren John š„
Day 17 - Building SaaS startup from Zero to One by Liam Dunne š„
Check these out.
BEFORE YOU GOā¦
Hey. Real quick. Before you click off.
Iāve got some big news dropping soon!
Launching something new. Keep an eye on your inbox this Thursday (barring any delays š). Iāll hit you with a bonus edition of Social Files detailing the big announcement.
Talk soon,
Tommy Clark
PS: I just released a template pack, with 50+ of the prompts we use with B2B CEOs at Compound.
PPS: If you want Compound to run a founder-led content motion for you⦠save a spot on our waitlist here. Weāre at capacity through October, but looking to partner with some SaaS startups in November.